01HIGH IMPACT
Absolute claims without hedging
A couple of claims are stated as universally true. Hedge with usually, tend to, in many cases — it reads as more academic and more honest.
In 4 of your last 5 essays
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Your weakest area is task 1 chart-language.
You climbed from Band 5.0 to Band 6.0 across your last five essays. Half a point from target.
Task 2 argument reached 6.5 in your latest essay. The gap is Task 1, where chart-language grammar and lexical range hold it at 5.5. The criterion sections below show exactly where.
Your band
6.0
Target
7.0
SKILL DISTRIBUTION
RECENT ESSAYS
How directly your essay answers the prompt.
7.0
Top patterns to fix
Ranked by how much fixing each one would move your TR band.
02MEDIUM IMPACT
Over-generalisation
"Employers usually look for experts" is the kind of claim examiners flag as un-nuanced. Add a scope (in specialist sectors, at graduate level).
In 3 of your last 5 essays
03LOW IMPACT
Vague people-noun
"People", "a person", "everyone" are placeholders where a specific group would land. Employers, workers, students — pick the actor and the argument sharpens.
In 2 of your last 5 essays
Evidence from your essays
Weakest sentence in this criterion across your last 4 essays, paired with a Band-7 rewrite.
Recommended actions
Re-ranked from your last 5 essays — the top lesson targets the issue that showed up most often.